Rfc - Lad Breeds Daddy - Freddy Miller, Gabriel... Instant

The author is looking for feedback on the pacing of the latest chapters—did the shift in their dynamic happen too fast, or was the slow burn just right?

The story follows the evolving and intense relationship between Freddy Miller and Gabriel. It leans heavily into power exchange themes and the "lad/daddy" dynamic, exploring the tension as Freddy (the lad) takes a more assertive role with the more experienced Gabriel. What I’m looking to discuss: RFC - Lad breeds daddy - Freddy Miller, Gabriel...

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