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“It’s a wandering series in need of an editor. Well written and acted but the pacing is weird and story arcs aren’t arced well, IMO.” www.facebook.com · 1 year ago the wandering
“Perfect balance of adventure and emotions. Great world building. Alien races that have enough humanity to be partly understandable and enough mystery not to be boringly human.” wanderinginn.com The Wandering Inn by pirateaba - Fantasy Book Review Alien races that have enough humanity to be
: The Audible version narrated by Andrea Parsneau is highly recommended; her performance is credited with "smoothing over rough patches" in the early writing and making the various voices feel distinct. Community Perspectives Because these books don't have a traditional editor,
“I almost put it down several times. Glad I didn't. Because these books don't have a traditional editor, you really get to see the author's writing evolve, and it gets much more polished as it goes on.”
Based on community feedback and expert reviews,
: As a web novel with over 16 million words, the pacing is a frequent point of critique. Many reviewers note that the first book feels like a "messy first draft" in need of a heavy-handed editor, with chapters that frequently "wander" and "dawdle" through slice-of-life moments.