Struggles & Pains -

Use specific words like "sharp," "dull," "throbbing," "tingling," or "burning" to help clinicians identify the cause.

Show characters attempting to resolve their pain rather than just stating they are in pain. For example, "she massaged her hurting fingers" is more evocative than "her fingers hurt". Struggles & Pains

Pain should not be static; it should evolve in stages (e.g., a wound that first sears, then itches, then tickles). Use specific words like "sharp