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The fire spreads rapidly. The Senator’s guards come to claim Livia, but the Senator himself has fled with his gold, leaving Livia’s father behind. Marcus uses his knowledge of the city’s underground aqueducts to lead Livia and her family to safety as the city burns.
Give your characters "goals, flaws, and stakes" to make them feel more complex. 6.5 / 10 DramaRoman...
If you want to "level up" this story or change the vibe, here are a few tips based on common drama-writing guides: The fire spreads rapidly
Livia meets Marcus at the Temple of Diana. He begs her to run away to the provinces, but she can't abandon her family. but she can't abandon her family.